Sample Answer IELTS Writing Task 2
about Opinion Essay 6
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample Answer :
In my opinion, men and women should have the same educational
opportunities. However, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal
proportions of each gender in every university subject.
Having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is
simply unrealistic. Student numbers on any course depend on the
applications that the institution receives. If a university decided to
fill courses with equal numbers of males and females, it would need
enough applicants of each gender. In reality, many courses are more
popular with one gender than the other, and it would not be practical to
aim for equal proportions. For example, nursing courses tend to attract
more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these courses
if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe
that it would be unfair to base admission to university courses on
gender. Universities should continue to select the best candidates for
each course according to their qualifications. In this way, both men and
women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will
be successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a
female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it would
be wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with lower grades or
fewer qualifications.
In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based
on merit, and it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a
selection procedure based on gender.
(265 words, band 9)
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