Sample Answer IELTS Writing Task 1
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The diagrams below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery.
Sample Answer :
The first picture shows the layout of an art gallery, and the second shows some proposed changes to the gallery space.
It is clear that significant changes will be made in terms of the use
of floor space in the gallery. There will be a completely new entrance
and more space for exhibitions.
At present, visitors enter the gallery through doors which lead into a
lobby. However, the plan is to move the entrance to the Parkinson Court
side of the building, and visitors will walk straight into the
exhibition area. In place of the lobby and office areas, which are shown
on the existing plan, the new gallery plan shows an education area and a
small storage area.
The permanent exhibition space in the redeveloped gallery will be
about twice as large as it is now because it will occupy the area that
is now used for temporary exhibitions. There will also be a new room for
special exhibitions. This room is shown in red on the existing plan and
is not currently part of the gallery.
(178 words, band 9)
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