Sample Answer IELTS Writing Task 1
about Map 2
Sample Answer :
The map shows the growth of a village called Chorleywood between 1868 and 1994.
It is clear that the village grew as the transport infrastructure was
improved. Four periods of development are shown on the map, and each of
the populated areas is near to the main roads, the railway or the
motorway.
From 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood covered a small area next to one of
the main roads. Chorleywood Park and Golf Course is now located next to
this original village area. The village grew along the main road to the
south between 1883 and 1922, and in 1909 a railway line was built
crossing this area from west to east. Chorleywood station is in this
part of the village.
The expansion of Chorleywood continued to the east and west alongside
the railway line until 1970. At that time, a motorway was built to the
east of the village, and from 1970 to 1994, further development of the
village took place around motorway intersections with the railway and
one of the main roads.
(174 words, band 9)
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its awesome i find a of difficulty in understanding this map...but u guys made it simple..thanks for the example...
ReplyDeleteThis is not quite a band 9 but its closer to a 7. Grammar structures are a bit limited and cohesion weak.
ReplyDeleteThis is not quite a band 9 but its closer to a 7. Grammar structures are a bit limited and cohesion weak.
ReplyDeleteare you sure? who you are exactly to evaluate that?
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