Sample Answer IELTS Writing Task 1 - Process Diagram 1

Sample Answer IELTS Writing Task 1
about Process Diagram 1

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.
 

Sample Answer :

The picture illustrates the process of coffee manufacture and preparation for sale on the market.

It is clear that there are 11 stages in the production of coffee. The process begins with the picking of coffee beans, and ends at the packing stage.

Looking at the coffee production process in detail, coffee beans must first be picked in the fields. These beans are then dried, roasted, and cooled before being put in a grinding machine, which turns the beans into coffee granules.

At the sixth stage in the process, the ground coffee is mixed with hot water, and the resulting mixture is strained. Next, the mixture is frozen and then passed once again through the grinder. After that, the ground, frozen liquid is dried in a vacuum so that the water evaporates, leaving the coffee granules. Finally, these granules are packed into coffee jars for delivery to shops.

(150 words, band 9)

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15 comments:

  1. thank you very much for thoso sample report, they are so useful ;)
    please keep up the good work.

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  2. thank you,really it is very helpful for every student.

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  3. What can prove this essay deserves a band of 9? It has some grammar inaccuracies and cases of tautology. Don't confuse students.

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  4. i deduce that it is helpful for the students.

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  5. I hope that There are no diagrams in my exam question T.T

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  6. I hope that There are no diagrams in my exam question T.T

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  8. It has 110 words, not 150. Nice answer, though.

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